Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

:love:
 
©2009 =wewtXD
:iconwewtxd:

Artist's Comments

because I'm a hopeless romantic who needs help.

This wasn't supposed to be transparent, but my computer was being a buttface. And who knows, someday, Ian might actually get legs. *hoshit*

Ian and Wanda from The Host.

Critiques


:iconlizzabeth:
I really love this picture, because I think it's a sweet portrayal of Wanda and Ian. :) I also love their hair! Epecially Ian's. But here are the things I see that you might want to work on:

1: I notice that the shoulders on both Wanda and Ian are attached a little too far off their torsos. You might want to move them in a little more.

2: Wanda's hand is a little strange-looking here, as well as Ian's. I think the main problem with Ian's is that it's way to small.

3: Ian's arm looks a little odd, especially in the forearm. It's also a little too long. You might want to work on the area where the elbow conjoins the two parts of his arm, and on his wrist and his right hand.

4: The way Ian's chest is bending in is too drastic, and his back is a little too hunched for the slightly-bent-over positon he's in. You might want to straighten him out a little, and bring the chest-line in a bit.

All in all, I really do love this piece. Just keep on working with human anatomy and proportion. Hope that helped!
The Artist thought this was FAIR
10 out of 10 deviants thought this was fair.

Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconacacin:
this is such a wonderful piece of art
:icon1lonlyant:
I LOVE THIS BOOK!

--
I'll dream of a better tomorrow for you because you deserve better.
:iconaribellaxxmarie:
yay!

--
"Edward dont lick Max..." ~no one ever gets out alive...~ "Be careful what you wish for..." "You make me Crazier..."
:iconwewtxd:
Oh thank you!

--
Commission me?

"What doesn't kill you simply makes you stranger."
:iconwewtxd:
It's your damn fault!

--
Commission me?

"What doesn't kill you simply makes you stranger."
:iconwewtxd:
Ha ha me too!

--
Commission me?

"What doesn't kill you simply makes you stranger."
:icon1lonlyant:
heehee :giggle:
Ian and Wanda is :heart:

--
I'll dream of a better tomorrow for you because you deserve better.
:iconrosie96:
I absolutely love those two. 8D I've read that book like three times now. It is waaaaay better then the Twilight series. (I don't like the Twilight series.)

--
You know someone isn't going to live through the night if I smile.

Details

April 9
259 KB
259 KB
800×900

Statistics

18
23 [who?]
1,094 (4 today)
103 (1 today)

Site Map