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Critiques
1: I notice that the shoulders on both Wanda and Ian are attached a little too far off their torsos. You might want to move them in a little more.
2: Wanda's hand is a little strange-looking here, as well as Ian's. I think the main problem with Ian's is that it's way to small.
3: Ian's arm looks a little odd, especially in the forearm. It's also a little too long. You might want to work on the area where the elbow conjoins the two parts of his arm, and on his wrist and his right hand.
4: The way Ian's chest is bending in is too drastic, and his back is a little too hunched for the slightly-bent-over positon he's in. You might want to straighten him out a little, and bring the chest-line in a bit.
All in all, I really do love this piece. Just keep on working with human anatomy and proportion. Hope that helped!
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