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Goodbye, My Bella by =wewtXD:iconwewtXD:





Goodbye, my Bella

I collapse on the ground,

My chest rising and falling rapidly.

Where I went wrong, who knows,

All that matters is her.

She is gone and I am unable to save her.

He has taken her, led her to her eternal grave.

I offered her love; she could have taken it.

She should have taken it.

I was perfect for her, and she for me;

We could have had a life, her and I,

But instead she chose him.

That filthy bloodsucker.

He has stolen my Bella, my one true love.

The bells that once rang in my ears,

Has now been muffled by his stone cold hands.

Her heart, which could have very easily,

Beat rapidly for me,

Will soon be stilled by his venom.

Man’s best friend; that is what I’m meant to be.

Her best friend is what I was,

Before he came back,

After abandoning her for so many months.

Charlie sees my point:

The bloodsucker cannot be trusted,

But he doesn’t stop it.

My father wanted them to move onto the rez,

Then we could be together.

But Charlie insisted that it would break Bella’s heart.

Little does he know,

Staying will lead to the end of her mortality.

But what it all comes down to is,

She is gone—no, is stolen,

By the filthy leech,

And I, now and forever, will roam this forest,

My heart in pieces.

Goodbye, my beautiful Bella.
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Author's Comments

Just a cheesy little poem I wrote in like five minutes. I just got back from a funeral and thought I'd write something deep...

...I failed.


Also, the icon is a quote from Jacob in Eclipse, in case you didn't know.


EDIT: Okay, just to clear up any confusion: I AM NOT FOR JACOB!! Really, I hate his guts!! I was just having one of those extremely rare 'lets-feel-bad-for-Jacob' moments. I am 100% Team Edward!!

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im sorry im team jacob im sorry

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sonadow
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MExSILVER
got a problem to dam bad
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:lol: It's okay. c:

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:)

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i sopport
shadamy
sonadow
sonilver
shadilver
silvamy
sonamy
edwardXbella
edwardXjacob
jacobXbella
aliceXbella
jasperXbella
jasperXalice
emmettXrosily
carlieXesme
leahXjacob
nessieXseth
and....
MExSILVER
got a problem to dam bad
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I hate Jacob too but you did a good job on this :D I think I only felt bad for Jacob one or two times maybe more but I doubt it

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Don't count your misfortunes, count your blessings.
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that was really good, it didnt quite capture jacobs pesemism but it was still very touching

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Hannah Sefton!

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These are my exact thoughts on Jacob Black. I hoe he dies a violent death and worms eat his corpse and then a big bird carries off the worms and feed them to the baby bird and then the baby bird craps Jacob out and the crap decomposes.

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Aliens will rule the world! Foolish Earthlings!
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i kno how u feel, u hate him, but u also feel sorry for him.
thats how i feel:slow:
JACOB BLACK IS A RETARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Vladimir Todd PWNS Edward Cullen! :la:
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I adopted an Allen Walker chibi from The-Den
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I think you did great, I like the quote lol.

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:D Thanks so much!

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I really love your things!

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